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  1. Posted: February 13, 2020In: Noir

    When Private Investigator Kris Kringle wakes with amnesia, he must use five clues found on his person to retrace his steps, remember his past and save a missing child.

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    Added an answer on February 13, 2020 at 8:46 pm

    Never use a characters name in a logline, give a description of who he is rather instead, and describe the characteristics that assembles him starting out as a weak character, and ending with a change of heart that possibly makes him stronger. And is the person a antagonist bit confused or is it himRead more

    Never use a characters name in a logline, give a description of who he is rather instead, and describe the characteristics that assembles him starting out as a weak character, and ending with a change of heart that possibly makes him stronger.

    And is the person a antagonist bit confused or is it himself? he fighting to piece together the clues to save this child…and what is this child too him? his kid, a runaway kid, or street kid? ?kind of vague there he should be a bit more descriptive that make us care bout this kid being found.

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