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  1. Posted: March 16, 2020In: Drama

    After a heated fallout with her former band mate, a determined singer signs a deal with a ruthless CEO unknowingly in the gangster lifestyle, who fills her head with promises and solo stardom, as she forms a greed dictated rivalry with her formal partner that culminates to tragedy.

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    Added an answer on March 16, 2020 at 11:40 am

    Feels too long and clustered.

    Feels too long and clustered.

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  2. Posted: February 24, 2020In: Thriller

    A young graduate, struggling to have a career as a photo-journalist but stuck without job prospects receives a call from a mysterious hacker organisation that wants to recruit him as their man in the field. He works for them while he tries to figure out what their ultimate goal is and confronts his opposing family.

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    Added an answer on February 24, 2020 at 9:37 am

    I think the logline is a bit flustered and uses more words than needed that can be broke down shorter!! ?When A struggling graduate wanting to be a photo journalist receives a call from a mysterious hacker, he must do what---- is a better way going about it in my opinion then come up with a stake thRead more

    I think the logline is a bit flustered and uses more words than needed that can be broke down shorter!! ?When A struggling graduate wanting to be a photo journalist receives a call from a mysterious hacker, he must do what-— is a better way going about it in my opinion then come up with a stake that prevent him from achieving his end goal..

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  3. Posted: February 17, 2020In: Drama

    After a empath singer offers to be a surrogate to her long time best friend, who struggles to conceive. She must overcome her guilt when she is told she could not conceive a child of her own due to her actions, and find the ability to accept her boyfriend’s desire to marry her, or lose him forever.

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    Added an answer on February 17, 2020 at 7:36 pm

    Honestly, I wanted to tackle the relationship more between the protagonist and her boyfriend, how this obstacle breaks them apart due to her insecurities when the man she with desperately wants to marry her and be a father and come to find out because of what she did it won't happen...she fear of loRead more

    Honestly, I wanted to tackle the relationship more between the protagonist and her boyfriend, how this obstacle breaks them apart due to her insecurities when the man she with desperately wants to marry her and be a father and come to find out because of what she did it won’t happen…she fear of losing him, and regretting it etc. I dunno, this was intended to be more of a series rather a movie so I guess thats why I had added that sub plot in there…with the boyfriend, since it was gone a 2 season storyline I had in mind. ?And the guy questions his feelings for her, when he takes her distance and objections to heart as she afraid to let him in due to her actions, and like at the end she realizes ?this setback just make her stronger, and accept that even if she can’t get a child of her own, her significant other will still be there for her. ?Something like that at least…

     

    So, loglines for series however should be the same as a solid movie logline?

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