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When a self-centered young talented musician lusting for the lifestyle of a rockstar, scores him and his band of brothers a chance to be signed and mentored by one of the music industry’s big time acts, he must wrestle with the rewards and pitfalls of stardom in the music industry as an artist and become a better man to those around him.
Thank you so much okay, I will try that! I have a bad habit being too specific lol I was following one of the guides examples provided on here to make this and I think I overdid it.
Thank you so much okay, I will try that! I have a bad habit being too specific lol I was following one of the guides examples provided on here to make this and I think I overdid it.
See lessWhen a star studded, self-centered young talented musician lusting for the lifestyle of a rockstar, scores him and his band of brothers a chance to be signed and mentored by one of the music industry’s big time acts, he must wrestle with the rewards and pitfalls of stardom, love, and loyalty in the music industry in order to maintain his integrity as an artist and become a better man to those around him.
Thank you for the comment review foremost! And see that’s what I’m struggling with identifying because how I perceive it the music industry is the antagonist because a lot goes on in Hollywood and the music industry when young stars enter them or any industry at a young age. They get exposed to to cRead more
Thank you for the comment review foremost! And see that’s what I’m struggling with identifying because how I perceive it the music industry is the antagonist because a lot goes on in Hollywood and the music industry when young stars enter them or any industry at a young age. They get exposed to to certain things for fame and notary. And with my concept my character go through these things in the music industry he is excited to live his dreams finally after getting this record deal but he is unprepared what’s thrown at him, example scandals, accused etc. that get him caught up and test his relationships with those he love. It’s not a direct antagonist human wise I’m trying not to go that route so I just am trying to find a way to convey that in my log line
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Not enough information, You need to establish in the logline what make us care about this worthless dog. What is at stake if the dog doesn't find him a home in time? the consequences of him or obstacles not getting his dream home? also, worthless is such a vague description of this animal....Is therRead more
Not enough information, You need to establish in the logline what make us care about this worthless dog. What is at stake if the dog doesn’t find him a home in time? the consequences of him or obstacles not getting his dream home? also, worthless is such a vague description of this animal….Is there an antagonist? and is that antagonist is physically something else, or mentally him finding himself and self worth, because if he’s worthless he has to find a way to NOT feel worthless, give us something that show he willing to change and question HOW will he make that happen?
I would take a look at the old 80’s Disney film “Oliver and Company” for some inspiration, seems like a similar theme here…just my two cents.
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