1. Posted: August 17, 2013In:

    Kicked out by her mom, a rebellious daughter is forced to join her broke and dysfunctional dad as he takes a last chance assignment to follow a corrupt politician in a cross country bike race.

    kjk11

    Dear Louise: I would call it a "buddy" film where both are the protagonists where the immediate goal is survival and the underlying theme is finding redemption and each other.

    Dear Louise: I would call it a “buddy” film where both are the protagonists where the immediate goal is survival and the underlying theme is finding redemption and each other.

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  2. Posted: August 16, 2013In:

    A dysfunctional dad and his rebellious daughter are forced to join each other in a bike race where they battle the establishment and each other relentlessly.

    kjk11

    Great comments. Thanks to all. Back to the drawing board.

    Great comments. Thanks to all. Back to the drawing board.

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  3. Posted: August 16, 2013In:

    After committing an atrocity, a true-believing champion of the Greek gods seeks redemption by hunting down a cunning, unchecked, voracious and pitiless enemy. But his quest leads him to uncover some cold truths about his masters. And the final choice he must make will shape humanity?s future for centuries to come.

    kjk11

    Sounds like a great script. How about: "A condemned man seeks the forgiveness of Zeus by hunting a merciless enemy of the gods only to uncover unsettling truths that threaten the future of all mortals."

    Sounds like a great script. How about:

    “A condemned man seeks the forgiveness of Zeus by hunting a merciless enemy of the gods only to uncover unsettling truths that threaten the future of all mortals.”

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