1. Posted: August 24, 2013In:

    Driven by his father's envy and murderous past, a Viking prince is pursued by jealous gods and a dark temptress in his quest for redemption.

    kjk11

    Thanks, you made my day. Screenplay is based on the Norse sagas. Do you want to read it? kjkorberg@gmail.com

    Thanks, you made my day. Screenplay is based on the Norse sagas. Do you want to read it?
    kjkorberg@gmail.com

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  2. Posted: August 24, 2013In:

    Driven by his father's envy and murderous past, a Viking prince is pursued by jealous gods and a dark temptress in his quest for redemption.

    kjk11

    Redemption from his fathers envy and disapproval, wording could be better. thanks.

    Redemption from his fathers envy and disapproval, wording could be better. thanks.

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  3. Posted: August 20, 2013In:

    An escaped convict is ensnared in a plot by a corrupt Sheriff to kidnap the young heiress to an oil fortune, complicating his quest for freedom.

    kjk11

    I think your logline is great. Brief but hits all key points and raises interest. Your strong logline does seem to call for a more intriguing title as there is no mention of judges there.

    I think your logline is great. Brief but hits all key points and raises interest. Your strong logline does seem to call for a more intriguing title as there is no mention of judges there.

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