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  1. Posted: December 29, 2017In: Fantasy

    “the sleight of hand”

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    Added an answer on December 29, 2017 at 7:03 am

    I like Craig?s answer. I don?t think need to worry about the how in a logline, just the what. Which in this case he discovers wizards are real, they earn money as magicians. I think there is a real fun concept here as magicians never reveal their secrets and this is their biggest one.

    I like Craig?s answer. I don?t think need to worry about the how in a logline, just the what.

    Which in this case he discovers wizards are real, they earn money as magicians. I think there is a real fun concept here as magicians never reveal their secrets and this is their biggest one.

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  2. Posted: February 14, 2017In: Student Loglines

    A group of criminals see their escape from prison when an infamous prison breaker arrive. The problem however : he doesn’t want to escape anymore.

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    Added an answer on February 14, 2017 at 7:41 am

    Who is the protagonist, the unwilling escape artist or a member of the criminal gang? Also, like most prison escape dramas, they make out the main character is in prison for the wrong reasons so we want them to escape, but why would we want a "Group of Criminals" to escape prison?

    Who is the protagonist, the unwilling escape artist or a member of the criminal gang?

    Also, like most prison escape dramas, they make out the main character is in prison for the wrong reasons so we want them to escape, but why would we want a “Group of Criminals” to escape prison?

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  3. Posted: February 2, 2017In: Thriller

    After her employers die in a city wide pandemic an Upper West Side nanny must navigate the violent streets to save their young son and put him on the last boat to safety.

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    Added an answer on February 2, 2017 at 3:45 pm

    Not sure why the boy is so special, why should she save him and not others. Also, as mentioned, is the pandemic still killing people. I would maybe have her infected, but the child is immune and is wanted by those who'll control the cure and she needs to get him to someone who'll create the cure forRead more

    Not sure why the boy is so special, why should she save him and not others. Also, as mentioned, is the pandemic still killing people.

    I would maybe have her infected, but the child is immune and is wanted by those who’ll control the cure and she needs to get him to someone who’ll create the cure for free.

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