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A con-artist uses a spy?s stolen dummy credit card to repay a debt, but, when it disables every online banking system in the world, together they must trace the virus to its source before it disappears.
I like the start, but in a strange way I then think the premise gets sidetracked. It almost feels like two different stories. It feels like it should either become a mistaken identity story, whereby as he used the card those after the real spy, but have no idea what he looks like, come for this guyRead more
I like the start, but in a strange way I then think the premise gets sidetracked. It almost feels like two different stories. It feels like it should either become a mistaken identity story, whereby as he used the card those after the real spy, but have no idea what he looks like, come for this guy or he starts using it to live the spy lifestyle, only to be caught up in a real plot.
The premise could work, as I assume the dummy card is actually a government device to be used on the real spy’s mission, which is meant to be abroad so when he uses it, will bring down the system. Now the spy not wanting to admit his mistake teams up with the person who stole it to disable the virus before it reaches it’s activation point (Which could be a spread level) I guess, for me, your current one feels disjointed however I think with some focus on why these characters would work together then it’ll work for the bigger picture.
Hope that makes sense
See lessUsing a mysterious equation to predict how and when he’ll die, a wealthy businessman must kill a corrupt government official to prevent his untimely demise, but when things go awry he starts to question if he is preventing or creating his fate.
Well, I would say it is mysterious as he won't know of it's origin, but was handed to him from a previous user who stipulated in his will should he die when predicted to inform others. Also, this is the part that got my mind working wasn't the other guy was going to kill him, no just that his beingRead more
Well, I would say it is mysterious as he won’t know of it’s origin, but was handed to him from a previous user who stipulated in his will should he die when predicted to inform others.
Also, this is the part that got my mind working wasn’t the other guy was going to kill him, no just that his being alive would lead to his death, and it’s when my protagonist fails to take him out it appears he is the cause of his own demise and as it gets worse he must wonder would this have happened if hadn’t found out… I guess think cookie jar matrix.
So yep ties into fate, control, determination.
As for Sci-Fi I was planning on mixing it with our current world almost in the tone of Self/Less
See lessIn the aftermath of nuclear war, a bleak NASA scientist builds and enters a virtual recreation of the past to find a way to save civilisation, only for the system?s AI to determine humanity is beyond saving and attempts to kill her.
Changed the logline so not as wordy, a problem I tend to have with a lot of my loglines, so it hopefully reads a lot better
Changed the logline so not as wordy, a problem I tend to have with a lot of my loglines, so it hopefully reads a lot better
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