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When she discovers a clue to NASA’s plan to escape Earth for a new world years before disaster and war ravaged the planet, a scavenger must use what she’s collected to find the mythical “last rocket” to escape our world and launch a new beginning for mankind.
It probably is a bit wordy, but the story is essentially a love letter to an era of fascination and exploration that perhaps we've lost.
It probably is a bit wordy, but the story is essentially a love letter to an era of fascination and exploration that perhaps we’ve lost.
See lessAfter his wife gives birth to a stillborn, a wizard has three days to enlist the help of the state?s only necromancer to resurrect his daughter and break a generational curse that will kill all the female children born into the family.
Personally, I would have the daughter about to be born rather than need resurrection. Him having to remove the curse before his daughter's birth gives you a time limit and personal stakes. Also, maybe I am reading it wrong, but why remove the curse if a wizard can resurrect people from the dead?So IRead more
Personally, I would have the daughter about to be born rather than need resurrection. Him having to remove the curse before his daughter’s birth gives you a time limit and personal stakes. Also, maybe I am reading it wrong, but why remove the curse if a wizard can resurrect people from the dead?
So I’d write it “When he discovers his unborn child is to be a girl, a wizard must track down and capture the villainous necromancer to remove?a curse that’s killing his female offspring”
Now, you can use the 0-8 month period to setup the world and the wizard’s worry etc, then only in the last month can a wizard determine gender and then he must go and return before the child is born.
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See lessWhen an orphan turned assassin in training disobeys killing her target, she is thrown into the lower ranks of the Assassin’s Guild, working as a servant, trying to work her way up only to discover her parents? killer walking the hallways and finding a record that showed her village?s demise was paid-for, not random and now she must find out the reason why her village was a target, and more importantly, who was responsible for it.
Hi, it does seem a little long and clunky. Recluse has done a pretty good job and making it a tighter logline.
Hi, it does seem a little long and clunky. Recluse has done a pretty good job and making it a tighter logline.
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