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  1. Posted: October 15, 2014In: Public

    A wannabe weatherman gets an internship at a small t.v. station in suburban Ohio, but must fight his own tendencies of stability against the abnormal weather patterns that fame the state.

    Knightrider1984 Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 15, 2014 at 2:17 pm

    It might sound odd, but I would have his instability tied to the weather somehow, so in a strange way he is reporting on his on well being without knowing it.

    It might sound odd, but I would have his instability tied to the weather somehow, so in a strange way he is reporting on his on well being without knowing it.

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  2. Posted: October 15, 2014In: Public

    A wannabe weatherman gets an internship at a small t.v. station in suburban Ohio, but must fight his own tendencies of stability against the abnormal weather patterns that fame the state.

    Knightrider1984 Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 15, 2014 at 2:17 pm

    It might sound odd, but I would have his instability tied to the weather somehow, so in a strange way he is reporting on his on well being without knowing it.

    It might sound odd, but I would have his instability tied to the weather somehow, so in a strange way he is reporting on his on well being without knowing it.

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  3. Posted: October 15, 2014In: Public

    A loving family man must go on the run after a powerful government program uses him as a proxy to commit murder. Now, in order to expose the truth, he'll have to reveal his own dark and secretive past.

    Knightrider1984 Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 15, 2014 at 10:49 am

    Thanks for your help, I will look to rework it. I guess I want to get across in my logline that he is framed as when he committed the murder he wasn't in control of his body at the time. So, the assassin would load himself into a person, who may have the target's trust etc, and simply walk in and doRead more

    Thanks for your help, I will look to rework it. I guess I want to get across in my logline that he is framed as when he committed the murder he wasn’t in control of his body at the time. So, the assassin would load himself into a person, who may have the target’s trust etc, and simply walk in and do the deed, once done the assassin transfers the person back in.

    So, the film will be able proving your innocence when everybody saw him do it.

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