1. Posted: October 18, 2014In:

    A middle-aged woman who was estranged from her father at age ten when he was taken to prison, journeys back through his life in an attempt to piece together the puzzle of the man she never really knew.

    Lara

    Thanks @dpg. Great questions to ask myself. I'll work with that. Much appreciation for your input. L.

    Thanks dpg. Great questions to ask myself. I’ll work with that. Much appreciation for your input. L.

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  2. Posted: October 18, 2014In:

    A middle-aged woman who was estranged from her father at age ten when he was taken to prison, journeys back through his life in an attempt to piece together the puzzle of the man she never really knew.

    Lara

    Thanks @dpg. Great questions to ask myself. I'll work with that. Much appreciation for your input. L.

    Thanks dpg. Great questions to ask myself. I’ll work with that. Much appreciation for your input. L.

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  3. Posted: October 16, 2014In:

    After hospital negligence leaves her son profoundly brain-injured, a mother consumed by anger risks alienating him as she struggles to let go of the boy he might have been and accept the boy he has become.

    Lara

    Great input @Nir Shelter and @dpg. Thank you. I'm new here, so just learning how it all works. I appreciate the tips and feedback. The mother son relationship and her evolution is really the crux of the story.. she fights her ass off, through raging anger and an addiction that resurfaces as a resultRead more

    Great input Neer Shelter and dpg. Thank you. I’m new here, so just learning how it all works. I appreciate the tips and feedback. The mother son relationship and her evolution is really the crux of the story.. she fights her ass off, through raging anger and an addiction that resurfaces as a result (which equals the potential risk of losing her son altogether) to basically learn to see the world, herself, her son and life in a completely different way and come out transformed. So, that being the case, it’s clearer now that to start with or even mention “hospital negligence” really isn’t relevant within the logline. Thanks again. L.

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