Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
After hospital negligence leaves her son profoundly brain-injured, a mother consumed by anger risks alienating him as she struggles to let go of the boy he might have been and accept the boy he has become.
Great input @Nir Shelter and @dpg. Thank you. I'm new here, so just learning how it all works. I appreciate the tips and feedback. The mother son relationship and her evolution is really the crux of the story.. she fights her ass off, through raging anger and an addiction that resurfaces as a resultRead more
Great input Neer Shelter and dpg. Thank you. I’m new here, so just learning how it all works. I appreciate the tips and feedback. The mother son relationship and her evolution is really the crux of the story.. she fights her ass off, through raging anger and an addiction that resurfaces as a result (which equals the potential risk of losing her son altogether) to basically learn to see the world, herself, her son and life in a completely different way and come out transformed. So, that being the case, it’s clearer now that to start with or even mention “hospital negligence” really isn’t relevant within the logline. Thanks again. L.
See lessIn order to save his life, a grief-stricken mother must simultaneously rely upon and fight the medical system that caused her son's brain injury, all the while learning to let go of the boy he would have been and accept the boy he has become.
Ooooohhh.. getting juicier with every post! Seriously though. I'm immensely grateful for your feedback @dpg and @gilgamesh. Thank you very much. You're really helping me get clear within my process and on what matters to the story and the audience. L.
Ooooohhh.. getting juicier with every post!
Seriously though. I’m immensely grateful for your feedback dpg and @gilgamesh. Thank you very much. You’re really helping me get clear within my process and on what matters to the story and the audience.
L.
See lessIn order to save his life, a grief-stricken mother must simultaneously rely upon and fight the medical system that caused her son's brain injury, all the while learning to let go of the boy he would have been and accept the boy he has become.
Ooooohhh.. getting juicier with every post! Seriously though. I'm immensely grateful for your feedback @dpg and @gilgamesh. Thank you very much. You're really helping me get clear within my process and on what matters to the story and the audience. L.
Ooooohhh.. getting juicier with every post!
Seriously though. I’m immensely grateful for your feedback dpg and @gilgamesh. Thank you very much. You’re really helping me get clear within my process and on what matters to the story and the audience.
L.
See less