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A shy artist from Togo who has just made his secondary education wants to begin studying the art, but is sent by his parents to Germany in order to secure the financial survival of the large family. If its existence, however, blows up, he can forget all his dreams- and his family has to live in poverty.
Perhaps start with something like this: A shy young artist from Togo wants to study art, but his parents insist he go to Germany and study finance to secure his large family's future... But maybe they want him to work and not study. We need to know this. Avoid wordy phrases like 'in order to' when aRead more
Perhaps start with something like this:
A shy young artist from Togo wants to study art, but his parents insist he go to Germany and study finance to secure his large family’s future…
But maybe they want him to work and not study. We need to know this. Avoid wordy phrases like ‘in order to’ when a single word does the job.
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