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Mistaken as Earth’s leader, due to his popularity on social media, a washed up actor is abducted by aliens to help prove humanity is worth saving from imminent destruction.
(Sorry I had a crash before I could finish.) The premise has great comic potential, though I'd avoid the Douglas Adams parallel. However a court battle is not going to hold attention for 90 mins - the court case sounds like the inciting incident, maybe the end of Act 1 (In Hitchhiker the Vogons areRead more
(Sorry I had a crash before I could finish.) The premise has great comic potential, though I’d avoid the Douglas Adams parallel. However a court battle is not going to hold attention for 90 mins – the court case sounds like the inciting incident, maybe the end of Act 1 (In Hitchhiker the Vogons are gone by Chapter 2). You need to give us some Goals, some Action and some original Consequences.
See lessMistaken as Earth’s leader, due to his popularity on social media, a washed up actor is abducted by aliens to help prove humanity is worth saving from imminent destruction.
Is his name Arthur Dent? Sounds an awful lot like The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy.
Is his name Arthur Dent? Sounds an awful lot like The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy.
See lessWith only 24 hours before her life support machine is switched off, a coma patient is given a second chance when she is recruited by an organisation that operates within the human subconscious to help stop a terror group that controls people via their dreams.
"A bitter coma patient"? How can he express emotions when he's in a coma? "A unique undercover agency"? I think it's back to the dictionary for you!
“A bitter coma patient”? How can he express emotions when he’s in a coma? “A unique undercover agency”? I think it’s back to the dictionary for you!
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