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  1. Posted: June 23, 2015In: Public

    When a university student returns native sacred objects to a rural town he awakens an old Celtic curse. He must confront the curse to save the town and himself.

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 24, 2015 at 4:19 pm

    Where is this rural town - in Cornwall-Devon where Celtic curses mingle incestuously with Arthurian legend? Hammer used this plot several times I recall. It needs a modern touch.

    Where is this rural town – in Cornwall-Devon where Celtic curses mingle incestuously with Arthurian legend? Hammer used this plot several times I recall. It needs a modern touch.

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  2. Posted: June 24, 2015In: Public

    When a depressed office worker learns that his estranged, Chinese mob-boss father has been murdered, he must return home to avenge him!!

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 24, 2015 at 4:13 pm

    This is a thin plot that reminds me of those Jacky Chan chop-socky movies that Shaw Brothers churned out every week in the 1960s. Does he need to be Chinese? As Nir Shelter says, it needs an antagonist and some stakes. Does he need to defeat a rival mob boss to inherit his father's evil empire? (WhoRead more

    This is a thin plot that reminds me of those Jacky Chan chop-socky movies that Shaw Brothers churned out every week in the 1960s. Does he need to be Chinese? As Nir Shelter says, it needs an antagonist and some stakes. Does he need to defeat a rival mob boss to inherit his father’s evil empire? (Whoops, that’s The Godfather) Does he need to stand up for himself because the rival mob want to kill him?

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  3. Posted: June 24, 2015In: Public

    When a mortally wounded astronaut crashes into an isolated road-diner, the young waitress must protect herself and her customers from the oncoming alien threat!!

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 24, 2015 at 4:01 pm

    If the astronaut is mortally wounded, presumably he dies before he tells the waitress about the threat (the inciting incident) .We need an inkling of the nature of this threat to the diners. Do the aliens take over their bodies, eat their brains, steal their food or just wipe them out with their rayRead more

    If the astronaut is mortally wounded, presumably he dies before he tells the waitress about the threat (the inciting incident) .We need an inkling of the nature of this threat to the diners. Do the aliens take over their bodies, eat their brains, steal their food or just wipe them out with their ray guns? I guess my question is whether the movie is schlock-horror or is there a message for the people of earth?

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