1. Posted: June 20, 2015In:

    After terrorists import germ warfare samples, a refugee scientist must face the nightmare of retrieving the antidote from Syria before it can be manufactured and released.

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher

    Thanks for the feedback. An important issue is the scientist's past - a murdered family in Syria - this is the nightmare he must confront. I'll keep struggling to fit it into 25 words.

    Thanks for the feedback. An important issue is the scientist’s past – a murdered family in Syria – this is the nightmare he must confront. I’ll keep struggling to fit it into 25 words.

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  2. Posted: June 17, 2015In:

    When a woman is imprisoned by a crazed vivisectionist, she must win the trust of the hybrids in order to escape and save her friends.

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher

    A great improvement on the original, thank you. Not really the plot I had in mind, but lots of possibilities. I may have to give you a credit...

    A great improvement on the original, thank you. Not really the plot I had in mind, but lots of possibilities. I may have to give you a credit…

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  3. Posted: June 19, 2015In:

    When robots run amuck in an historical theme park, a shy Chinese boy must battle robotic Australian icons to save the lives of his classmates.

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher

    I speak as someone who has worked in Chinese cinema - shy boys don't sell. My point was: why a Chinese boy in the first place? (See FFF's comments below). It seems like racial stereotyping - I'd drop it and think of another adjective.

    I speak as someone who has worked in Chinese cinema – shy boys don’t sell. My point was: why a Chinese boy in the first place? (See FFF’s comments below). It seems like racial stereotyping – I’d drop it and think of another adjective.

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