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  1. Posted: June 19, 2015In: Public

    A fake hitman working for the police becomes the real thing when, learning that his actions have inadvertently taken the life of a young child, he teams up with the child's mother to take down a notorious criminal boss who has evaded justice.

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 19, 2015 at 2:23 pm

    Too much front-loading. Try this: When an undercover cop accidentally kills a child, he teams up with the child's mother to pursue and execute the criminal boss responsible for the cock-up.

    Too much front-loading. Try this:
    When an undercover cop accidentally kills a child, he teams up with the child’s mother to pursue and execute the criminal boss responsible for the cock-up.

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  2. Posted: June 19, 2015In: Public

    When robots run amuck in an historical theme park, a shy Chinese boy must battle robotic Australian icons to save the lives of his classmates.

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 19, 2015 at 2:16 pm

    Are you hoping for a Chinese release? If so, I wouldn't make the boy "shy", rather he should be proficient in martial arts.

    Are you hoping for a Chinese release? If so, I wouldn’t make the boy “shy”, rather he should be proficient in martial arts.

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  3. Posted: June 19, 2015In: Public

    When an American bushwalker falls into an unexplored gorge, he must help his three companions escape a ravenous arachnid humanoid to survive.

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 19, 2015 at 2:13 pm

    I wonder why he must be American. And presumably his three companions also fall into the gorge. Given 20 mins to the set-up, 70 mins seems a bit long to fill with a spider chase. Have a look at Deliverance to see how John Boorman did it.

    I wonder why he must be American. And presumably his three companions also fall into the gorge. Given 20 mins to the set-up, 70 mins seems a bit long to fill with a spider chase. Have a look at Deliverance to see how John Boorman did it.

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