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  1. Posted: June 18, 2015In: Public

    When a deadly soil-borne virus is released in Canberra, an obsessed scientist battles military and political forces to save the city from pre-emptive destruction.

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 18, 2015 at 10:29 am

    Yes, for a number of reasons it must be set in Canberra (no matter what your parochial view, it is the capital city of Australia). A virus with soil as host (not a human or animal) , accidentally released from the CSIRO labs, reproducing exponentially, like a mycelium ring, will reach the outskirtsRead more

    Yes, for a number of reasons it must be set in Canberra (no matter what your parochial view, it is the capital city of Australia). A virus with soil as host (not a human or animal) , accidentally released from the CSIRO labs, reproducing exponentially, like a mycelium ring, will reach the outskirts of Canberra in x months. The army proposes to destroy the city with a nuclear weapon to save the rest of Australia, the politicians abandon the city. But our scientist believes he can control the virus with something simple, if only…

    Thanks for your comments. I’ll re-think “pre-emptive”, “obsessed”, etc.

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  2. Posted: June 18, 2015In: Public

    When a deadly soil-borne virus is released in Canberra, an obsessed scientist battles military and political forces to save the city from pre-emptive destruction.

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 18, 2015 at 10:18 am

    See below. The Big Flip is a previous logline which had big problems.

    See below. The Big Flip is a previous logline which had big problems.

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  3. Posted: June 16, 2015In: Public

    When a Governors daughter is kidnapped, a remorseful gang banger is recruited as part of an elite team to rescue her.

    Lemmy Caution Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 18, 2015 at 8:49 am

    "A remorseful gang banger"? Do you mean rapist? I think you'll find it difficult making your main character sympathetic. (BTW, check your apostrophes).

    “A remorseful gang banger”? Do you mean rapist? I think you’ll find it difficult making your main character sympathetic. (BTW, check your apostrophes).

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