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  1. Posted: February 11, 2018In: Action

    After losing everything in a battle that he thought was to the death, The Gambler Fox is teleported from Mystic Post Medieval Ireland to Modern Day Las Vegas, Fox must learn to survive and live with a different type of people while looking for the one, Raven, who took everything from him and try to keep his reborn love, Vivian, from being killed a second time.

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    Added an answer on February 12, 2018 at 1:25 am

    Richiev is right. It is rather long, but this is only the rough draft to see if people are interested in this kind of plot. I found out too late that adding names is a bad idea for multiple reasons. Definitely a learning curve. Here is a more suitable draft I think, but still needs some work. "AfterRead more

    Richiev is right. It is rather long, but this is only the rough draft to see if people are interested in this kind of plot. I found out too late that adding names is a bad idea for multiple reasons. Definitely a learning curve.

    Here is a more suitable draft I think, but still needs some work.

    “After a Gambler is teleported to Las Vegas, he must look for his archenemy while keeping his reborn love alive.”

    Still needs work, but what I have so far.

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  2. Posted: February 11, 2018In: Action

    After losing everything in a battle that he thought was to the death, The Gambler Fox is teleported from Mystic Post Medieval Ireland to Modern Day Las Vegas, Fox must learn to survive and live with a different type of people while looking for the one, Raven, who took everything from him and try to keep his reborn love, Vivian, from being killed a second time.

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    Added an answer on February 11, 2018 at 4:53 am

    I forgot to add the word "where" between "Las Vegas, Fox." Modern Day Las Vegas where Fox must learn to survive and live. Thank you for your comments.

    I forgot to add the word “where” between “Las Vegas, Fox.” Modern Day Las Vegas where Fox must learn to survive and live. Thank you for your comments.

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