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  1. Posted: February 18, 2018In: Action

    After a scientific accident that leaves everyone dead and one with fire abilities, the survivor must travel to a sacred temple to learn how to control his abilities.

    Leviathan Samurai
    Added an answer on February 19, 2018 at 2:44 am

    After a devastating accident leaves someone with the ability to manipulate fire, the man goes to an ancient temple to learn how to control it before someone else takes ahold of it, using it for darker purposes.

    After a devastating accident leaves someone with the ability to manipulate fire, the man goes to an ancient temple to learn how to control it before someone else takes ahold of it, using it for darker purposes.

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  2. Posted: February 18, 2018In: Action

    After refusing to do a job, a contract is put out on him where he must decide between his survival and the life of his target.

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    Added an answer on February 19, 2018 at 2:14 am

    Ah, I just went through the logline formula, let's try this: After refusing to do a job that he was ordered to do, a contract is put out on the assassin, making him decide between his survival and the life of his target. It's short, has a hook, and keeps the idea in focus. Wording could be a littleRead more

    Ah, I just went through the logline formula, let’s try this:

    After refusing to do a job that he was ordered to do, a contract is put out on the assassin, making him decide between his survival and the life of his target.

    It’s short, has a hook, and keeps the idea in focus. Wording could be a little bit. Will work on that.

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  3. Posted: February 18, 2018In: Action

    After a scientific accident that leaves everyone dead and one with fire abilities, the survivor must travel to a sacred temple to learn how to control his abilities.

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    Added an answer on February 18, 2018 at 2:07 pm

    You're right. I should have gone with a different adjective to describe the accident. No one will care about the science part of it, but rather if it was a devastating accident, people would probably view it differently because then the survivor of the accident would need to learn how to control hisRead more

    You’re right. I should have gone with a different adjective to describe the accident. No one will care about the science part of it, but rather if it was a devastating accident, people would probably view it differently because then the survivor of the accident would need to learn how to control his abilities, no matter how he got them.

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