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  1. Posted: February 19, 2018In: Action

    When a young, restless girl runs away from her castle, she is stopped by her most trusted friend to find her castle is taken and her family is killed, now she must fight to take her kingdom back, unaware of the secrets that lie around her, starting with her most trusted friend.

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    Added an answer on February 28, 2018 at 12:07 am

    I've given it some thought and I don't know how good this is, but I know it's better than the first. When a princess from her castle to avoid an arranged marriage, she slowly realizes the arranged marriage was a plot to take over her kingdom, now she must find a way to get her kingdom, completely unRead more

    I’ve given it some thought and I don’t know how good this is, but I know it’s better than the first.

    When a princess from her castle to avoid an arranged marriage, she slowly realizes the arranged marriage was a plot to take over her kingdom, now she must find a way to get her kingdom, completely unaware of the dangers that lie ahead.

    Let’s try this one and see where it goes.

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  2. Posted: February 24, 2018In: Drama

    After losing her partner in dance competition and being stuck in physical therapy for her injuries, the girl must find another partner to win the upcoming competition in which her coach suggested a perfectly skilled street fighter with no dance experience.

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    Added an answer on February 26, 2018 at 2:26 pm

    After losing the dance competition, a young ambitious woman finds herself set up with a impulsive street fighter by her coach to win the next upcoming event. I felt like this logline is more clear, probably still a little bit long, but more detailed, involved and open. Hopefully everyone approves. IRead more

    After losing the dance competition, a young ambitious woman finds herself set up with a impulsive street fighter by her coach to win the next upcoming event.

    I felt like this logline is more clear, probably still a little bit long, but more detailed, involved and open. Hopefully everyone approves. I look forward to the comments.

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  3. Posted: February 19, 2018In: Action

    When a young, restless girl runs away from her castle, she is stopped by her most trusted friend to find her castle is taken and her family is killed, now she must fight to take her kingdom back, unaware of the secrets that lie around her, starting with her most trusted friend.

    Leviathan Samurai
    Added an answer on February 21, 2018 at 1:00 am

    I didn't realize that this logline would create this kind of involvement, I appreciate everyone's advice and pointers. I didn't think this one through before I posted it. I'll try and do better in the future. I learned quite a bit from everyone's comments, especially DPG and CraigDGriffiths. Thank yRead more

    I didn’t realize that this logline would create this kind of involvement, I appreciate everyone’s advice and pointers. I didn’t think this one through before I posted it. I’ll try and do better in the future. I learned quite a bit from everyone’s comments, especially DPG and CraigDGriffiths. Thank you. I’m working on another logline for this, but I’m going to check it for the list you all have given me from your comments.

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