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After a dancer loses her competition, she turns to a skilled street fighter to up her game for the upcoming competition.
This is a remake of one the other log lines I wrote. When I used the word "game", You can use performance or game for the competition. I just this one is better than the last one.
This is a remake of one the other log lines I wrote. When I used the word “game”, You can use performance or game for the competition. I just this one is better than the last one.
See lessWhen the mentor of ruthless assassin/lone wolf cop is murdered, the assassin/cop bands his team of skilled corrupt cops/best friends together to find the one responsible.
People are right about it being wordy. I just didn't know how to put it down the way I wanted, but this is just a rough draft anyway, so I came up with a better one. After an assassin mentor is killed, his cop student bands his friends together to hunt down the person responsible, a corrupt ATF AgenRead more
People are right about it being wordy. I just didn’t know how to put it down the way I wanted, but this is just a rough draft anyway, so I came up with a better one.
After an assassin mentor is killed, his cop student bands his friends together to hunt down the person responsible, a corrupt ATF Agent, who is out to destroy the city.
Still may be a little words with assassin mentor and cop student, drawing unnecessary attention to the character, but I was trying to emphasize around the two main characters. It does still sounds like a typical revenge film, but I’ve seen plenty of movies with the same loglines that have completely different meanings behind each of them.
I like your title, Richiev, if I make it a tv series. I might have to call it that because everyone gets dirty in the cop vs cop or cop vs agent movies, so that would fit in perfectly.
See lessAfter an young girl is bought from slavery, she is taken to a school where she becomes a witch, where she uses her abilities to kill her former master and save her family.
Richiev, I've always loved your reviews and consider them the utmost of constructive criticism taken to heart. I agree with everyone about the fact that this is a plot, not a logline. I've been rewriting it for some time and I think this is what I was really looking for, but still need to hone it aRead more
Richiev, I’ve always loved your reviews and consider them the utmost of constructive criticism taken to heart. I agree with everyone about the fact that this is a plot, not a logline. I’ve been rewriting it for some time and I think this is what I was really looking for, but still need to hone it a little more.
When a young girl is bought from slavery by a warlock, she learns the art of witchcraft and returns to kill her former master and find her missing family.
The inciting incident that leads to the cause and effect. I almost have it. I don’t know what possessed me to write a silly plot when this is a logline community.
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