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  1. Posted: March 15, 2018In: Drama

    After a dancer loses her competition, she turns to a skilled street fighter to up her game for the upcoming competition.

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    Added an answer on March 18, 2018 at 4:03 am

    Valentin, I wasn't referring to a computer nerd. A hand to hand combatant is more where this logline was leading. Street fighter, mma fighter, it was essentially the same idea or lead of possibilities. As to how the dancer lost the competition, I found that unimportant in the logline. It took up tooRead more

    Valentin, I wasn’t referring to a computer nerd. A hand to hand combatant is more where this logline was leading. Street fighter, mma fighter, it was essentially the same idea or lead of possibilities. As to how the dancer lost the competition, I found that unimportant in the logline. It took up too much space and made it too wordy. It was that the dancer lost the competition that was the inciting incident that caused her to look for a new dance partner, ergo the fighter, to improve her performance for the upcoming competition. As to how, I’m hoping I can leave that out to inspire some faith and imagination as to what a fighter can do to help her improve. Not to mention, a fighter also has conflicts. As to what, you’ll have to wait for the release of the script to find out what his challenges and growth is.

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  2. Posted: March 17, 2018In: Action

    When an archaeologist is killed by a god, a student in mythology finds out and goes on the journey to find the weapon that can kill gods, a grotesque monster made back by a medieval monastery father.

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    Added an answer on March 18, 2018 at 3:56 am

    Since all the names I come up with? are either hard to pronounce or complicated. I can't name them, but I guess it would be easier to state which god they died by rather than the names. It still gives the impression, just a little more creativity on the reader's part to come up with a name until theRead more

    Since all the names I come up with? are either hard to pronounce or complicated. I can’t name them, but I guess it would be easier to state which god they died by rather than the names. It still gives the impression, just a little more creativity on the reader’s part to come up with a name until the actual script comes out.

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  3. Posted: March 17, 2018In: Horror

    After being arrested for having dangerous future technology, the prison unleashes a hyper aggressive android, loyal to him, upon the police station in an attempt to escape.

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    Added an answer on March 18, 2018 at 1:09 am

    Well, I'm trying to write a story where the villain wins. Thought that might be a new kind of twist in imagination. See where it leads.

    Well, I’m trying to write a story where the villain wins. Thought that might be a new kind of twist in imagination. See where it leads.

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