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  1. Posted: September 10, 2013In: Public

    To get the girl of his dreams a timid momma?s boy must team up with the local cat burglar, but her unorthodox methods put more than his love life at risk.

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    Added an answer on September 13, 2013 at 4:13 am

    Good points in the comments above. Is it possible that the timid boy learns more about himself while being with the cat burglar and ultimately falls in love with her?

    Good points in the comments above. Is it possible that the timid boy learns more about himself while being with the cat burglar and ultimately falls in love with her?

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  2. Posted: September 12, 2013In: Public

    An unimaginative accountant who hates musicals is transported to an alternate universe where everybody sing and dance. He struggles to return to his own universe before he succumbs to the compulsion of joining in.

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    Added an answer on September 13, 2013 at 4:05 am

    Interesting concept. Consider rewriting without the use of a period. Most loglines are only one sentence and 35-40 words.

    Interesting concept. Consider rewriting without the use of a period. Most loglines are only one sentence and 35-40 words.

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