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On the verge of destroying his career and his marriage, a washed up writer imprisons himself in his office where his characters begin to appear in the flesh, but when they are murdered one by one, he must come to terms with the dark secrets of his childhood before he loses his livelihood, his family and his sanity.
Very interesting premise but as a logline this is a bit more of a long-line. The prevalent convention is for loglines to stay within 35-40 words. Yours is 58. Consider deleting the second list of what he will lose since you open with that. Or open with "A washed up writer..." By deleting everythingRead more
Very interesting premise but as a logline this is a bit more of a long-line. The prevalent convention is for loglines to stay within 35-40 words. Yours is 58. Consider deleting the second list of what he will lose since you open with that. Or open with “A washed up writer…” By deleting everything before that you cut nine words. Also delete the redundant “his” at the end. Another two words. This brings you to 46! Winner.
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Richiev, I like your suggestion of "a reclusive clan of cannibals." Much better! Thank you.
Richiev, I like your suggestion of “a reclusive clan of cannibals.” Much better! Thank you.
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Very solid logline. Well written.
Very solid logline. Well written.
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