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When a young lawyer dies and is sent to hell, he is determined to break his way into heaven, or he will suffer for eternity./Kalle
This is a very good concept and I could see Jim Carey in the lead, but would you consider this slight change? Instead of trying to "break his way into heaven," since he is a lawyer, what if he tried to win the case in the divine court, for why he should be allowed to enter heaven? Otherwise, who carRead more
This is a very good concept and I could see Jim Carey in the lead, but would you consider this slight change? Instead of trying to “break his way into heaven,” since he is a lawyer, what if he tried to win the case in the divine court, for why he should be allowed to enter heaven? Otherwise, who cares if he is a lawyer or garbage collector?
If you make the point that he is a lawyer, then use it for the story. Unless you are just making a statement that all lawyers will be going to hell. Which of course is a completely valid argument.
You may also want to give the protagonist, the lawyer, a second more compelling reason to need to get to heaven, beyond saving his own skin from eternal damnation. What if he needs to ascend to save the woman he loves still living on earth?
Just some thoughts. Good start!
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This is titled Tron right?
This is titled Tron right?
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Ahhhh! Yes, this should read "woman". Dang it! There are ten pages written, but this is part of my write a logline a day project (see @loglinesrUs on Twitter, or www.loglinesrus.wordpress.com) Thanks for the comment.
Ahhhh! Yes, this should read “woman”. Dang it! There are ten pages written, but this is part of my write a logline a day project (see LoglinesRUS on Twitter, or http://www.loglinesrus.wordpress.com) Thanks for the comment.
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