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  1. Posted: September 24, 2013In: Public

    80 year old Rachel wakes up in the spirit world and finds out she is dead. It was entirely different what she had thought of life after death and to her shock there was only 80 minutes left to rebirth. Rachel needs to complete a task which will decide her karma in her newborn life. The challenge in completing the task – she is getting younger minute by minute in the spirit world and will take rebirth as a newborn in 80 minutes. She needs to use the time appropriately to achieve the task, as in the early minutes and in the end ones, she will either be too old or too young for the task and she has to complete the task while her coffin is buried in the funeral. Will she succeed or not, time will tell.

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    Added an answer on September 24, 2013 at 11:24 pm

    Hi Anand, this is not a logline. While the concept of your film sounds interesting, a logline should only be 35-40 words and in one sentence. What you have written is more of a synopsis. Consider re-writing in the correct format. Good luck.

    Hi Anand, this is not a logline. While the concept of your film sounds interesting, a logline should only be 35-40 words and in one sentence. What you have written is more of a synopsis. Consider re-writing in the correct format. Good luck.

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  2. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    When a young lawyer dies and is sent to hell, he is determined to break his way into heaven, or he will suffer for eternity./Kalle

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    Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 8:35 am

    I like this logline much better and at 44 words you are just fine.

    I like this logline much better and at 44 words you are just fine.

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  3. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    When a young lawyer dies and is sent to hell, he is determined to break his way into heaven, or he will suffer for eternity./Kalle

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    Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 2:31 am

    Certainly easy to think of how a lawyer would end up in hell. :-) Glad you liked my idea. Best of luck with this.

    Certainly easy to think of how a lawyer would end up in hell. 🙂
    Glad you liked my idea. Best of luck with this.

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