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Everyone has secrets. What extent will the people of Splendid Harbor, NH go to keep their secrets from becoming known? Worlds will be rocked and someone will die as each unveiled secret brings up darker secrets from a prominent family's past …
This really isn't a logline. First you have multiple sentences..a no-no. And you ask a rhetorical question. Another no-no. You need to share who the antagonist and protagonist are and what is the conflict. Consider this, When the dark secrets of a prominent family of Splendid Harbor are unveiled, moRead more
This really isn’t a logline. First you have multiple sentences..a no-no. And you ask a rhetorical question. Another no-no. You need to share who the antagonist and protagonist are and what is the conflict.
Consider this, When the dark secrets of a prominent family of Splendid Harbor are unveiled, more lives are at stake unless the returning grandson can stop the blackmailer from revealing more of the family?s twisted past.”
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Great re-write! Good luck with this.
Great re-write! Good luck with this.
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Agree with the above comments. Shorten to one sentence that is 35-40 words. Answer who has what illness. Emphasis what will happen if the con doesn't work out. What is the conflict? And what is in jeopardy?
Agree with the above comments. Shorten to one sentence that is 35-40 words. Answer who has what illness. Emphasis what will happen if the con doesn’t work out. What is the conflict? And what is in jeopardy?
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