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  1. Posted: August 20, 2015In: Public

    After a botched robbery, two incompetent thieves must avoid the authorities and elude a serial killer who they carjacked.

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    Added an answer on August 20, 2015 at 10:59 pm

    All good, but one thing - what's their goal?

    All good, but one thing – what’s their goal?

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  2. Posted: August 14, 2015In: Public

    A low-ranking police officer must infiltrate a hostage situation to save his dying wife and their unborn son.

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    Added an answer on August 20, 2015 at 4:28 pm

    Because there are cows in it. Literally and metaphorically.

    Because there are cows in it. Literally and metaphorically.

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  3. Posted: August 14, 2015In: Public

    A low-ranking police officer must infiltrate a hostage situation to save his dying wife and their unborn son.

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    Added an answer on August 16, 2015 at 5:54 pm

    "why not leave it up to the professionals?" It's supposed to take place in a small town, there aren't too many "professionals", however, as insurance for everybody's safety, he agreed not to involve anybody else. I think 'infiltrate' has a more surreptitious meaning behind it, breaking in while tryiRead more

    “why not leave it up to the professionals?”

    It’s supposed to take place in a small town, there aren’t too many “professionals”, however, as insurance for everybody’s safety, he agreed not to involve anybody else.

    I think ‘infiltrate’ has a more surreptitious meaning behind it, breaking in while trying not to be discovered – kind of thing. ‘Raid’ to me indicates a violent act.

    I guess ‘Die Hard’ would be close, but I’m looking at more of an ‘Ash’ from Evil Dead I/II, where he begins quite timid and grows into the loud-mouth antihero of ‘Army of Darkness’, but perhaps not quite as “larger than life”.

    As far as McClane’s reason for being in the Nakatomi building, it was just as simple as that’s where his wife was. Not a very strong motivation at all, at least not until the shooting starts.

    I guess also, paternal instinct may not be seen as a strong motivation for my character, at least not for anybody who doesn’t have children.

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