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  1. Posted: June 19, 2015In: Public

    A fake hitman working for the police becomes the real thing when, learning that his actions have inadvertently taken the life of a young child, he teams up with the child's mother to take down a notorious criminal boss who has evaded justice.

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    Added an answer on June 19, 2015 at 3:32 pm

    Not going by what's written in the logline he didn't...

    Not going by what’s written in the logline he didn’t…

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  2. Posted: June 19, 2015In: Public

    A fake hitman working for the police becomes the real thing when, learning that his actions have inadvertently taken the life of a young child, he teams up with the child's mother to take down a notorious criminal boss who has evaded justice.

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    Added an answer on June 19, 2015 at 11:50 am

    If he's working for the police, why doesn't he team up with the police rather than a civilian?

    If he’s working for the police, why doesn’t he team up with the police rather than a civilian?

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  3. Posted: June 9, 2015In: Public

    In a future where criminals are punished with instant aging, when a young ex-convict -turned 70- learns about a place where his youth can be restored, he has a week to find it before the process becomes irreversible.

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    Added an answer on June 10, 2015 at 12:00 am

    "Not sure how it would play on screen though, as you don?t see many action films with a 60 year-old protagonist." I guess you've just arrived on this planet today? Red, The Expendables, Taken... off the top of my head. My suggestion was going to be make him become older - 80-ish - because 60 now isRead more

    “Not sure how it would play on screen though, as you don?t see many action films with a 60 year-old protagonist.”

    I guess you’ve just arrived on this planet today? Red, The Expendables, Taken… off the top of my head.

    My suggestion was going to be make him become older – 80-ish – because 60 now is the 40 of ten years ago, probably longer.

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