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  1. Posted: June 4, 2015In: Public

    A regular teenage girl and a recently divorced 40 year old strike up a relationship only to realize that the 40 year old isn't who he says he is but he is really a sociopath

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    Added an answer on June 4, 2015 at 7:24 pm

    Why did it take 35 words to say "when a teen girl realises her recently divorced friend is a sociopath..."?

    Why did it take 35 words to say “when a teen girl realises her recently divorced friend is a sociopath…”?

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  2. Posted: June 3, 2015In: Public

    When the military quarantines a zombie infested Seattle, a ruthless Vampire and his crew must team with a ragtag band of humans to secure the old church they are trapped in or be overrun.

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    Added an answer on June 3, 2015 at 3:21 pm

    So you're going to make up your own vampire rules and have them able to enter churches? Are they going to sparkle in the daylight, too?

    So you’re going to make up your own vampire rules and have them able to enter churches?

    Are they going to sparkle in the daylight, too?

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  3. Posted: May 28, 2015In: Public

    After a young talented street musician who suffers from stage fright is moving to New York City and wanting to realize his dream of a breakthrough as a band with his brother, he falls into the hands of a greedy music producer who promises the big deal, but forces him to decide between a successful career as a solo artist or an unknown band life with his brother.

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    Added an answer on May 29, 2015 at 12:32 am

    What has happened to this logline? It's back to where it was when you first submitted it. Start with the event that sets the main character into action (you've got like, four) and then end with the decision he has made rather than leaving the choice up in the air, as this weakens that character pushRead more

    What has happened to this logline? It’s back to where it was when you first submitted it.

    Start with the event that sets the main character into action (you’ve got like, four) and then end with the decision he has made rather than leaving the choice up in the air, as this weakens that character pushing him along rather than having him lead the story…

    “After falling into the hands of a greedy producer, a very talented street performer must break his contract when he realises his dream of joining his brother’s band…”

    Or something like that, I don’t effing know, it’s your story – that’s 28 word by the way…

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