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  1. Posted: May 5, 2015In: Public

    A young white Afrikaner fights for the liberation of his people in an alternate history of reversed Apartheid.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on May 6, 2015 at 12:58 am

    The logline is quite clear, but people don't see the logline, they see what is on the screen and they would see a white man dominating over black people, history reversed or not.

    The logline is quite clear, but people don’t see the logline, they see what is on the screen and they would see a white man dominating over black people, history reversed or not.

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  2. Posted: May 5, 2015In: Public

    A young white Afrikaner fights for the liberation of his people in an alternate history of reversed Apartheid.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on May 5, 2015 at 6:13 pm

    'Finally, maybe you could give a clue about the fact that this is not a racist movie.' Yeah, it's only a movie where a white man is forced to dominate over black people... So good luck with that.

    ‘Finally, maybe you could give a clue about the fact that this is not a racist movie.’

    Yeah, it’s only a movie where a white man is forced to dominate over black people…

    So good luck with that.

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  3. Posted: April 2, 2015In: Public

    A hedonistic, white american jock at a small Florida college accidentally falls in love with the guarded, over-studious black Bahamian girl in his English class after he and his clique are forced to lodge with her and her family during their spring break trip to The Bahamas.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on April 2, 2015 at 9:47 pm

    And the rest? So far you have a premise and a situation, but no antagonist, stakes or goal...

    And the rest? So far you have a premise and a situation, but no antagonist, stakes or goal…

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