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  1. Posted: March 6, 2015In: Public

    A shy artist from Togo who has just made his secondary education wants to begin studying the art, but is sent by his parents to Germany in order to secure the financial survival of the large family. If its existence, however, blows up, he can forget all his dreams- and his family has to live in poverty.

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    Added an answer on March 6, 2015 at 4:34 pm

    Also, real life dictates that if you want to study art, you had better be used to living in near poverty.

    Also, real life dictates that if you want to study art, you had better be used to living in near poverty.

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  2. Posted: March 6, 2015In: Public

    When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.

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    Added an answer on March 6, 2015 at 4:30 pm

    1) What is this "darkness"? 2) If her child is "twisted", does this mean they were correct to put them both in quarantine? 3) If that is indeed the case, what are they freeing their child from exactly? 4) Did this "prime evil" put them into quarantine? 5) Was the quarantine a ruse to infect the chilRead more

    1) What is this “darkness”?

    2) If her child is “twisted”, does this mean they were correct to put them both in quarantine?

    3) If that is indeed the case, what are they freeing their child from exactly?

    4) Did this “prime evil” put them into quarantine?

    5) Was the quarantine a ruse to infect the child with the “darkness”?

    You’ve described a situation which raises more questions than it answers. You have a lot of cleaning up to do before this becomes a logline.

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  3. Posted: February 26, 2015In: Public

    ?After a car accident leaves him in a coma, a lazy Amish logline writer finds himself trapped in an elevator with Hell?s best producer. He now has six floors to pitch and sell an idea to save his physical body and awake.?

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    Added an answer on February 26, 2015 at 6:48 pm

    I'm assuming the logline writer is the main character, what must he do to gain redemption? And if he's dead, what does he care?

    I’m assuming the logline writer is the main character, what must he do to gain redemption?

    And if he’s dead, what does he care?

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