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A boy who spent all his life believing he was weak, suddenly discovers that there is something, something special about himself. He never understood until he fell 1200 feet off a mountain during a trek; and survived without a scratch.
'When a weak-willed boy survives a mountain fall without injury...' That's pretty much all you have, everything else is filler or implied. Okay, he finds something special about being practically invulnerable, but what the reader needs to know is what he plans to do with this ability.
‘When a weak-willed boy survives a mountain fall without injury…’
That’s pretty much all you have, everything else is filler or implied. Okay, he finds something special about being practically invulnerable, but what the reader needs to know is what he plans to do with this ability.
See lessA remedial math teacher is forced to wonder if he wasted his potential as a screenwriter when his ex-highschool sweetheart, now a hollywood actress visits their hometown.
Yes... then what does he DO about it?
Yes… then what does he DO about it?
See lessA female ex-military operative awakens to discover she has been transformed into a cyborg by a group of scientists who are challenged by her efforts to escape and retaliate.
Does she challenge them after she becomes a cyborg, or is her challenging them the reason why they made her a cyborg? You might need to make this clear since it would be pretty stupid of people to take somebody known to be confrontational and then give them a weapon they can use against you...
Does she challenge them after she becomes a cyborg, or is her challenging them the reason why they made her a cyborg? You might need to make this clear since it would be pretty stupid of people to take somebody known to be confrontational and then give them a weapon they can use against you…
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