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When an earthquake infests an apartment complex with fast-breeding spiders, a young entomologist's plan to save the residents means forcing a war veteran survivalist from his home.
1: Perhaps. 2: Homes are generally important to people. 3: Spiders haven't been "deadly" for decades. It's just not believable anymore. Although, if you have any other suggestions for how to make the logline 'gripping', I'd be happy to hear them. 4: 'Wannabe' tells people even less. Old? Young? Is hRead more
1: Perhaps.
2: Homes are generally important to people.
3: Spiders haven’t been “deadly” for decades. It’s just not believable anymore.
Although, if you have any other suggestions for how to make the logline ‘gripping’, I’d be happy to hear them.
4: ‘Wannabe’ tells people even less. Old? Young? Is he preparing to become an entomologist, or is he just very bad at it? More questions are asked than answered. And to make the character clearer, I’m going to get bogged down in a sentence long description of the little shit.
Finally… : You’re not seeing a written connection between forcing somebody out of their home and saving the complex because there isn’t one. The goal is quite clear, to save the residents.
As far as the spiders suddenly going away when the veteran moves out – most definitely, in a way.
Unfortunately, none of the above suggestions apply to my story.
See lessWhen an earthquake infests an apartment complex with fast-breeding spiders, a young entomologist's plan to save the residents means forcing a war veteran survivalist from his home.
The point I am making is the scientific interest itself is called 'entomology' even if you don't have a degree in the subject. There is also no rogue philatelist group, that I know of, meting out justice over "unqualified" stamp purchasing.
The point I am making is the scientific interest itself is called ‘entomology’ even if you don’t have a degree in the subject.
There is also no rogue philatelist group, that I know of, meting out justice over “unqualified” stamp purchasing.
See lessWhen an earthquake infests an apartment complex with fast-breeding spiders, a young entomologist's plan to save the residents means forcing a war veteran survivalist from his home.
The point I am making is the scientific interest itself is called 'entomology' even if you don't have a degree in the subject. There is also no rogue philatelist group, that I know of, meting out justice over "unqualified" stamp purchasing.
The point I am making is the scientific interest itself is called ‘entomology’ even if you don’t have a degree in the subject.
There is also no rogue philatelist group, that I know of, meting out justice over “unqualified” stamp purchasing.
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