1. Posted: January 21, 2015In:

    After being brutally raped, A Lesbian Anti Abortion rights Activist must decide between aborting the child or keeping it. (FOR MEETUP REVIEW)

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    Too "tagline"-ish. Obviously, you know how it will end, so you should mention the action your main character needs to take to achieve that end, and put both in the logline.

    Too “tagline”-ish. Obviously, you know how it will end, so you should mention the action your main character needs to take to achieve that end, and put both in the logline.

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  2. Posted: January 14, 2015In:

    When a young girl possesses her son, a sceptical anthropologist must help a former priest demon hunter reclaim his faith to fight a demon and save them all.

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    Those are good ideas, but definitely ones more suited to a dramatic film. Unfortunately, I'm not in my Jane Campion period just yet. Thank you.

    Those are good ideas, but definitely ones more suited to a dramatic film.

    Unfortunately, I’m not in my Jane Campion period just yet.

    Thank you.

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  3. Posted: January 14, 2015In:

    When a young girl possesses her son, a sceptical anthropologist must help a former priest demon hunter reclaim his faith to fight a demon and save them all.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner

    Those are good ideas, but definitely ones more suited to a dramatic film. Unfortunately, I'm not in my Jane Campion period just yet. Thank you.

    Those are good ideas, but definitely ones more suited to a dramatic film.

    Unfortunately, I’m not in my Jane Campion period just yet.

    Thank you.

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