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In a future where babies are no longer born, a black market dealer of artificial wombs must find his baby daughter when competitors take the womb and sell it to the highest bidder. (For #meetup)
As a setting isn't really required for a logline, I'd probably lose the firstline of this and start from "a black market dealer". Something like "a black market dealer of artificial wombs must (do something in order to) find his unborn daughter when competitors take the womb and sell it to the higheRead more
As a setting isn’t really required for a logline, I’d probably lose the firstline of this and start from “a black market dealer”.
Something like “a black market dealer of artificial wombs must (do something in order to) find his unborn daughter when competitors take the womb and sell it to the highest bidder” and then work from there.
Mentioning what he needs to do in order to achieve his goal can sometimes be good for a logline like this one.
See lessWhen the Dragon Kingdom?s Prince discovers his brother has stolen Phoenix eggs from the Phoenix Kingdom, he must return the eggs before war breaks out between two kingdoms that have recently come to peace. (For #meetup)
MUCH better.
MUCH better.
See lessWhen the Dragon Kingdom?s Prince discovers his brother has stolen Phoenix eggs from the Phoenix Kingdom, he must return the eggs before war breaks out between two kingdoms that have recently come to peace. (For #meetup)
MUCH better.
MUCH better.
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