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A girl in the Old West becomes the town judge, just before her outlaw aunt shows up.
"I am somewhat dubious about the premise of a woman judge in such a sexist era and society." Perhaps introduce a backstory of how the judges in this one particular town have been so for the past however many generations - "my daddy was a judge, my grandpappy before him and his pappy before that" (exRead more
“I am somewhat dubious about the premise of a woman judge in such a sexist era and society.”
Perhaps introduce a backstory of how the judges in this one particular town have been so for the past however many generations – “my daddy was a judge, my grandpappy before him and his pappy before that” (excuse my somewhat offensive attempt at old west vernacular) and the first boy in each generation was trained at a certain age to takeover as judge, but her father only had the girl and everybody agreed that tradition was important or whatever, so they continued with it despite that one hiccup.
Something that might fit into the “world” of the story.
I mean, Dr Quinn, Medicine Woman went for six seasons, so as long as you can make it work, you’re golden…
See lessA girl in the Old West becomes the town judge, just before her outlaw aunt shows up.
"I am somewhat dubious about the premise of a woman judge in such a sexist era and society." Perhaps introduce a backstory of how the judges in this one particular town have been so for the past however many generations - "my daddy was a judge, my grandpappy before him and his pappy before that" (exRead more
“I am somewhat dubious about the premise of a woman judge in such a sexist era and society.”
Perhaps introduce a backstory of how the judges in this one particular town have been so for the past however many generations – “my daddy was a judge, my grandpappy before him and his pappy before that” (excuse my somewhat offensive attempt at old west vernacular) and the first boy in each generation was trained at a certain age to takeover as judge, but her father only had the girl and everybody agreed that tradition was important or whatever, so they continued with it despite that one hiccup.
Something that might fit into the “world” of the story.
I mean, Dr Quinn, Medicine Woman went for six seasons, so as long as you can make it work, you’re golden…
See lessIn a future where babies are no longer born, a black market dealer of artificial wombs must find his baby daughter when competitors take the womb and sell it to the highest bidder. (For #meetup)
As a setting isn't really required for a logline, I'd probably lose the firstline of this and start from "a black market dealer". Something like "a black market dealer of artificial wombs must (do something in order to) find his unborn daughter when competitors take the womb and sell it to the higheRead more
As a setting isn’t really required for a logline, I’d probably lose the firstline of this and start from “a black market dealer”.
Something like “a black market dealer of artificial wombs must (do something in order to) find his unborn daughter when competitors take the womb and sell it to the highest bidder” and then work from there.
Mentioning what he needs to do in order to achieve his goal can sometimes be good for a logline like this one.
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