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When an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter exacts his revenge on those responsible, he must rescue an innocent life to destroy a demon from his own mind made flesh.
I originally went with part-abortion, but somebody didn't understand what that meant. I can always hope potential readers are smarter than that guy. I'll probably go back to 'part-abortion' and either they're grossed out by it or not, which is better than being confused. At least then they might beRead more
I originally went with part-abortion, but somebody didn’t understand what that meant. I can always hope potential readers are smarter than that guy.
I’ll probably go back to ‘part-abortion’ and either they’re grossed out by it or not, which is better than being confused.
At least then they might be interested enough in reading a treatment.
Still, minor tweaking to the logline needs to be done, but I think I’m there story-wise…
See lessWhen an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter exacts his revenge on those responsible, he must rescue an innocent life to destroy a demon from his own mind made flesh.
I originally went with part-abortion, but somebody didn't understand what that meant. I can always hope potential readers are smarter than that guy. I'll probably go back to 'part-abortion' and either they're grossed out by it or not, which is better than being confused. At least then they might beRead more
I originally went with part-abortion, but somebody didn’t understand what that meant. I can always hope potential readers are smarter than that guy.
I’ll probably go back to ‘part-abortion’ and either they’re grossed out by it or not, which is better than being confused.
At least then they might be interested enough in reading a treatment.
Still, minor tweaking to the logline needs to be done, but I think I’m there story-wise…
See lessWhen an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter exacts his revenge on those responsible, he must rescue an innocent life to destroy a demon from his own mind made flesh.
As "rescue Y" is a result of "destroy Z", I think I've managed to straighten it out a little. Either see new response above, or look below... 'Discovering his patients are being murdered in attacks on abortion clinics, an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter must stop the killer to saveRead more
As “rescue Y” is a result of “destroy Z”, I think I’ve managed to straighten it out a little.
Either see new response above, or look below…
‘Discovering his patients are being murdered in attacks on abortion clinics, an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter must stop the killer to save his now pregnant daughter.’
At least now, whatever the problem, he has something to do and a reason for it…
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