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When an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter exacts his revenge on those responsible, he must rescue an innocent life to destroy a demon from his own mind made flesh.
As "rescue Y" is a result of "destroy Z", I think I've managed to straighten it out a little. Either see new response above, or look below... 'Discovering his patients are being murdered in attacks on abortion clinics, an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter must stop the killer to saveRead more
As “rescue Y” is a result of “destroy Z”, I think I’ve managed to straighten it out a little.
Either see new response above, or look below…
‘Discovering his patients are being murdered in attacks on abortion clinics, an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter must stop the killer to save his now pregnant daughter.’
At least now, whatever the problem, he has something to do and a reason for it…
See lessWhen an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter exacts his revenge on those responsible, he must rescue an innocent life to destroy a demon from his own mind made flesh.
Seeing as I wanted to go the supernatural route anyway, I've come up with the following, which has been "worded up" for purposes of flow or whatever you wish to call it... - 'Discovering his patients are being murdered in attacks on abortion clinics, an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matRead more
Seeing as I wanted to go the supernatural route anyway, I’ve come up with the following, which has been “worded up” for purposes of flow or whatever you wish to call it… –
‘Discovering his patients are being murdered in attacks on abortion clinics, an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter must stop the killer to save his now pregnant daughter.’
I figure if I want to go with redemption, make the ‘innocent life’ closer to the main character emotionally…
See lessWhen an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter exacts his revenge on those responsible, he must rescue an innocent life to destroy a demon from his own mind made flesh.
Seeing as I wanted to go the supernatural route anyway, I've come up with the following, which has been "worded up" for purposes of flow or whatever you wish to call it... - 'Discovering his patients are being murdered in attacks on abortion clinics, an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matRead more
Seeing as I wanted to go the supernatural route anyway, I’ve come up with the following, which has been “worded up” for purposes of flow or whatever you wish to call it… –
‘Discovering his patients are being murdered in attacks on abortion clinics, an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter must stop the killer to save his now pregnant daughter.’
I figure if I want to go with redemption, make the ‘innocent life’ closer to the main character emotionally…
See less