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  1. Posted: December 20, 2014In: Public

    After an attack turns him half-man half-abortion, an obstetrician uses newfound abilities to exact revenge on the attackers as his inner demon threatens to become flesh and kill him.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on December 30, 2014 at 7:26 am

    I'm not sure where you're getting the idea that this is some kind of anti-abortion Meredith Baxter touchie-feelie piece, but it's really not.

    I’m not sure where you’re getting the idea that this is some kind of anti-abortion Meredith Baxter touchie-feelie piece, but it’s really not.

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  2. Posted: December 20, 2014In: Public

    After an attack turns him half-man half-abortion, an obstetrician uses newfound abilities to exact revenge on the attackers as his inner demon threatens to become flesh and kill him.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on December 30, 2014 at 12:31 am

    1) Look at the "Wordy Version" and that's the whole 'plot' (I guess), it looks like there's more to it than there is, but I'm just trying to answer questions people have had - why this, how come that, etc. 2) The demon may just be a complication, but it's part of the story, it's included so maybe soRead more

    1) Look at the “Wordy Version” and that’s the whole ‘plot’ (I guess), it looks like there’s more to it than there is, but I’m just trying to answer questions people have had – why this, how come that, etc.

    2) The demon may just be a complication, but it’s part of the story, it’s included so maybe somebody can help me see a way around it in order to turn this into a better performing logline.

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    Because the demon is from his own head, a psychological side effect of his transformation, until then the demon never existed except maybe as an attachment to his own guilt as a doctor who takes lives / performs abortions.

    I’m not into the whole ‘Rob Zombie / the vicious killer had a traumatic childhood / a semester and a half of basic psych’ thing, so emotional minefield or not, I’m not really looking to address it.

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  3. Posted: December 20, 2014In: Public

    After an attack turns him half-man half-abortion, an obstetrician uses newfound abilities to exact revenge on the attackers as his inner demon threatens to become flesh and kill him.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on December 30, 2014 at 12:31 am

    1) Look at the "Wordy Version" and that's the whole 'plot' (I guess), it looks like there's more to it than there is, but I'm just trying to answer questions people have had - why this, how come that, etc. 2) The demon may just be a complication, but it's part of the story, it's included so maybe soRead more

    1) Look at the “Wordy Version” and that’s the whole ‘plot’ (I guess), it looks like there’s more to it than there is, but I’m just trying to answer questions people have had – why this, how come that, etc.

    2) The demon may just be a complication, but it’s part of the story, it’s included so maybe somebody can help me see a way around it in order to turn this into a better performing logline.

    And…

    Because the demon is from his own head, a psychological side effect of his transformation, until then the demon never existed except maybe as an attachment to his own guilt as a doctor who takes lives / performs abortions.

    I’m not into the whole ‘Rob Zombie / the vicious killer had a traumatic childhood / a semester and a half of basic psych’ thing, so emotional minefield or not, I’m not really looking to address it.

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