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  1. Posted: December 20, 2014In: Public

    After an attack turns him half-man half-abortion, an obstetrician uses newfound abilities to exact revenge on the attackers as his inner demon threatens to become flesh and kill him.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on December 29, 2014 at 4:17 pm

    Motherly Love.

    Motherly Love.

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  2. Posted: December 20, 2014In: Public

    After an attack turns him half-man half-abortion, an obstetrician uses newfound abilities to exact revenge on the attackers as his inner demon threatens to become flesh and kill him.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on December 28, 2014 at 9:33 pm

    As far as I can take your additional advice, I have but two additional attempts to address the concerns you mentioned - The "Wordy Version": When pro-lifers set fire to an abortion clinic, an obstetrician is unknowingly trapped inside. As he takes refuge in an abortion disposal tank, an electrical fRead more

    As far as I can take your additional advice, I have but two additional attempts to address the concerns you mentioned –

    The “Wordy Version”:

    When pro-lifers set fire to an abortion clinic, an obstetrician is unknowingly trapped inside.
    As he takes refuge in an abortion disposal tank, an electrical fault activates the mechanism.
    He is then transformed into part-man part-foetal matter which gives him shapeshifting powers.
    Using his new abilities he begins to take revenge while visions of a mother-creature composed of his victims haunt his mind.
    After he takes an innocent life, the mother-creature becomes flesh to try and destroy him.
    His powers having now abandoned him, he must save the innocent life to redeem himself and save his own.

    ———

    The “Less Wordy Version”:

    After pro-lifers try boiling him to death in an abortion disposal unit, an obstetrician now composed of fetal remains takes his revenge using shapeshifting powers, but when he takes an innocent life, his inner demon becomes flesh to kill him.

    (This version actually came first, but it really didn’t answer your concerns at all.)

    ———

    Feedback appreciated, let’s see what can happen from this point forward…

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  3. Posted: December 20, 2014In: Public

    After an attack turns him half-man half-abortion, an obstetrician uses newfound abilities to exact revenge on the attackers as his inner demon threatens to become flesh and kill him.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on December 28, 2014 at 9:33 pm

    As far as I can take your additional advice, I have but two additional attempts to address the concerns you mentioned - The "Wordy Version": When pro-lifers set fire to an abortion clinic, an obstetrician is unknowingly trapped inside. As he takes refuge in an abortion disposal tank, an electrical fRead more

    As far as I can take your additional advice, I have but two additional attempts to address the concerns you mentioned –

    The “Wordy Version”:

    When pro-lifers set fire to an abortion clinic, an obstetrician is unknowingly trapped inside.
    As he takes refuge in an abortion disposal tank, an electrical fault activates the mechanism.
    He is then transformed into part-man part-foetal matter which gives him shapeshifting powers.
    Using his new abilities he begins to take revenge while visions of a mother-creature composed of his victims haunt his mind.
    After he takes an innocent life, the mother-creature becomes flesh to try and destroy him.
    His powers having now abandoned him, he must save the innocent life to redeem himself and save his own.

    ———

    The “Less Wordy Version”:

    After pro-lifers try boiling him to death in an abortion disposal unit, an obstetrician now composed of fetal remains takes his revenge using shapeshifting powers, but when he takes an innocent life, his inner demon becomes flesh to kill him.

    (This version actually came first, but it really didn’t answer your concerns at all.)

    ———

    Feedback appreciated, let’s see what can happen from this point forward…

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