1. Posted: August 15, 2014In:

    A young sheriff returns home to where his outlaw mother was brutally killed to find the girl he grew up with now in charge and wanting the same for him.

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    Lucius Paisley Logliner

    I think you're overthinking it, because that's really confusing. You're never going to get this down to under 30 words...

    I think you’re overthinking it, because that’s really confusing.

    You’re never going to get this down to under 30 words…

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  2. Posted: August 15, 2014In:

    A serial womaniser discovers women from his past are murdered soon after making amends and must find their killer before an inoperable brain tumour kills him.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner

    I know the term "true love" is clich?, but if we ignore that for a moment... 'When former girlfriends he made amends to are killed, a serial womaniser must evade the police and stop the murder of his true love.' Possibly 'a dying serial womaniser'.

    I know the term “true love” is clich?, but if we ignore that for a moment…

    ‘When former girlfriends he made amends to are killed, a serial womaniser must evade the police and stop the murder of his true love.’

    Possibly ‘a dying serial womaniser’.

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  3. Posted: August 15, 2014In:

    A serial womaniser discovers women from his past are murdered soon after making amends and must find their killer before an inoperable brain tumour kills him.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner

    I know the term "true love" is clich?, but if we ignore that for a moment... 'When former girlfriends he made amends to are killed, a serial womaniser must evade the police and stop the murder of his true love.' Possibly 'a dying serial womaniser'.

    I know the term “true love” is clich?, but if we ignore that for a moment…

    ‘When former girlfriends he made amends to are killed, a serial womaniser must evade the police and stop the murder of his true love.’

    Possibly ‘a dying serial womaniser’.

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