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  1. Posted: August 15, 2014In: Public

    A serial womaniser discovers women from his past are murdered soon after making amends and must find their killer before an inoperable brain tumour kills him.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on August 15, 2014 at 1:47 pm

    Excellent, I can work with that. Then maybe shorten it a bit and try to squeeze in another story element?

    Excellent, I can work with that. Then maybe shorten it a bit and try to squeeze in another story element?

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  2. Posted: August 15, 2014In: Public

    A serial womaniser discovers women from his past are murdered soon after making amends and must find their killer before an inoperable brain tumour kills him.

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    Added an answer on August 15, 2014 at 11:08 am

    See, THAT'S the part I had to leave out - his way of making amends is by giving every woman from his past a business type card that only says 'You Are Beautiful', which leads the authorities to him as the prime suspect - in short, they track the cards to the maker, the maker names the womaniser - soRead more

    See, THAT’S the part I had to leave out – his way of making amends is by giving every woman from his past a business type card that only says ‘You Are Beautiful’, which leads the authorities to him as the prime suspect – in short, they track the cards to the maker, the maker names the womaniser – so not only does he want to clear his name, he wants to do it before he’s no longer capable.

    And don’t give me any of this “if he’s going to die anyway, why does he care?” crap… 🙂

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  3. Posted: August 15, 2014In: Public

    A serial womaniser discovers women from his past are murdered soon after making amends and must find their killer before an inoperable brain tumour kills him.

    Lucius Paisley Logliner
    Added an answer on August 15, 2014 at 11:08 am

    See, THAT'S the part I had to leave out - his way of making amends is by giving every woman from his past a business type card that only says 'You Are Beautiful', which leads the authorities to him as the prime suspect - in short, they track the cards to the maker, the maker names the womaniser - soRead more

    See, THAT’S the part I had to leave out – his way of making amends is by giving every woman from his past a business type card that only says ‘You Are Beautiful’, which leads the authorities to him as the prime suspect – in short, they track the cards to the maker, the maker names the womaniser – so not only does he want to clear his name, he wants to do it before he’s no longer capable.

    And don’t give me any of this “if he’s going to die anyway, why does he care?” crap… 🙂

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