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Brought together in the shadow of teleportation and world faith, neither Rupert nor Levi thought to save humanity; one must, before the other does.
Richiev / dpg I see your point, I was so wrapped in telling what happens without telling what happens! Looking back I think I've written a Tagline not a Logline! Thanks
Richiev / dpg
I see your point, I was so wrapped in telling what happens without telling what happens!
Looking back I think I’ve written a Tagline not a Logline!
Thanks
See lessSome old-styled black magician migrants are suspected for the mysterious death of a boy, and their houses burnt down; but soon these good people turn back to life as the undead due to their powers and are hungry for revenge from the entire town.
Richiev has nailed this, Spiritwriter, it's too long and confusing. It does sound intriguing, but needs a lot of work. Along with the points already raised, are the migrants black, or do they perform black-magic? If you can get it down to around 25 words, so much the better. My version might go someRead more
Richiev has nailed this, Spiritwriter, it’s too long and confusing.
It does sound intriguing, but needs a lot of work.
Along with the points already raised, are the migrants black, or do they perform black-magic?
If you can get it down to around 25 words, so much the better.
My version might go something like:
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Users of old magic, a migrant family suspected of a boy’s death return as the undead, when burnt alive by locals; and vie for revenge.
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Good luck
See lessWhile waiting for a mechanic, a prize fighting luchador is forced to defend his broken down van from a wild chupacabra.
Interesting Tor, but I'm split 50/50 with this one, as I do not know what a luchador or a chupcabra actually are. This may a) tempt me to find out - in which case I could be hooked, or b) not want to find out - and look for something else.
Interesting Tor, but I’m split 50/50 with this one, as I do not know what a luchador or a chupcabra actually are. This may a) tempt me to find out – in which case I could be hooked, or b) not want to find out – and look for something else.
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