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  1. Posted: May 26, 2018In: SciFi

    A teen mysteriously cured of terminal cancer becomes the centerpiece of a war between supernatural factions that are hellbent on procuring a miraculous, prophetic pregnancy that grows inside of her.

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    Added an answer on October 28, 2018 at 12:20 am

    Who is the protagonist? If not the girl you must decide who it will be. The information is all there but the order in which you present your logline could be better. Start with the prophetic pregnancy (inciting incident) and go to the outcome of it and the conflict stuff. By the way, who are these sRead more

    Who is the protagonist? If not the girl you must decide who it will be.
    The information is all there but the order in which you present your logline could be better. Start with the prophetic pregnancy (inciting incident) and go to the outcome of it and the conflict stuff. By the way, who are these supernatural factions?

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  2. Posted: October 27, 2018In: SciFi

    Set in the year 2050: When he wakes up out of his coffin to discover that Transylvania has become an Orwellian fascist state, Count Dracula must lead a rebellion and take them down before they uncover his true identity.

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    Added an answer on October 27, 2018 at 11:43 am

    He wakes up out of his coffin, or he wakes up and gets out? How does he end up leading the revolt? If he uses his powers of persuasion people will know who he is... besides he only gets out at night. Why is he trying to conceal his identity? Does he conceal it from his revolutionary partners? What tRead more

    He wakes up out of his coffin, or he wakes up and gets out?
    How does he end up leading the revolt? If he uses his powers of persuasion people will know who he is… besides he only gets out at night. Why is he trying to conceal his identity? Does he conceal it from his revolutionary partners?
    What triggered his awakening?
    When you say “take them down” you should be more specific: the oligarchy, the party, the president and his goons!? Who is the main antagonist? the police chief, the guy in charge?

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  3. Posted: October 27, 2018In: Genres

    Stand-alone episodes with a revolving cast determined to enter the psyche of viewers and leave behind irrational, unrealistic, or environmentally triggered fears and an ending that will be anything but happy!

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    Added an answer on October 27, 2018 at 11:31 am

    Who's the protagonist? The goal and conflict is not clear. Who are these people? What kind of show is this? Fiction or reality TV? How do they enter the psyche of the viewers? What's the genre?

    Who’s the protagonist?
    The goal and conflict is not clear.
    Who are these people? What kind of show is this?
    Fiction or reality TV?
    How do they enter the psyche of the viewers?
    What’s the genre?

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