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A group of sister have a lengthy conversation trying to fill in the social, cultural and physiological blanks about a long extinct species: Humans.
Sounds like a short movie, or a theater piece... Use the plural in sisters... How many sisters? Is this a post-human species or just a group of aliens? Are they organic beings? What is their interest in humans? Are they scientists or is this just a casual conversation? What kind of society are we taRead more
Sounds like a short movie, or a theater piece… Use the plural in sisters… How many sisters?
See lessIs this a post-human species or just a group of aliens? Are they organic beings?
What is their interest in humans? Are they scientists or is this just a casual conversation?
What kind of society are we talking about?
Do they have contrasting opinions about humans? You need conflict…
If it is a comedy you should present something that indicates the genre in your logline.
A driver intent on picking up and murdering a hitch-hiker picks up a hitch-hiker intent on murdering a driver.
Cool. This could work as a comedy as well.
Cool. This could work as a comedy as well.
See lessWhen his doctor tells him he only has one month to live, a recent grad and his best friend are determined to check everything off of his bucket list.
Don't start with the doctor, start with the protagonist and give a bit more info on this guy. Who is he? Ex.: When a popular recent grad finds out he has just one month to live, he and his best friend will check everything off his bucket list. Is he the popular guy, the nerd, the athletic? What kindRead more
Don’t start with the doctor, start with the protagonist and give a bit more info on this guy. Who is he?
See lessEx.: When a popular recent grad finds out he has just one month to live, he and his best friend will check everything off his bucket list.
Is he the popular guy, the nerd, the athletic? What kind of list are we talking about? Is this a comedy or a drama?