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Two cops must stop a drug cartel from unleashing his narcotic on the city before everyone becomes addicted.
...unleashing their narcotic... What kind of narcotic are we talking about and why will "everyone" use it and become addicted? Is it in the food? In the water?
…unleashing their narcotic…
What kind of narcotic are we talking about and why will “everyone” use it and become addicted? Is it in the food? In the water?
See lessA group of assassins from around the world race against time in NYC to get to the prize that has the key to stopping bombs that are about to kill them.
Your logline is a bit difficult to read/ understand at first. You should re-write it. Use the formula: When [a major event happens], [the hero], must [do the main action]. Ex.: When a group of assassins finds out they have bombs placed inside their bodies they will race against time to discover theRead more
Your logline is a bit difficult to read/ understand at first. You should re-write it. Use the formula: When [a major event happens], [the hero], must [do the main action].
Ex.: When a group of assassins finds out they have bombs placed inside their bodies they will race against time to discover the key that prevents them from exploding…
See lessA high school student inherits supernatural powers and becomes a vigilante as he attempts to save the rainy city of Seattle from becoming a fiery hell.
He inherits his powers? from who? Is he special or was it by luck? What kind of supernatural powers? Why do you say they are supernatural? Why and when does he decide to become a vigilante? Are you aiming at comedy when you say the rainy city of Seatle will become a fiery hell or does this have to dRead more
He inherits his powers? from who? Is he special or was it by luck? What kind of supernatural powers? Why do you say they are supernatural? Why and when does he decide to become a vigilante? Are you aiming at comedy when you say the rainy city of Seatle will become a fiery hell or does this have to do with the supernatural stuff? Is Lucifer involved? Why fire?
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