1. Posted: March 14, 2016In:

    In post-apocalyptic Africa, a clairvoyant mute and her telepathic son, falsely accused of witchcraft, struggle to escape a marauding group of villagers desperate to burn them at the stakes.

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    martinreese Logliner

    I think this logline has promise, but i don't get who has the bizarre infirmity. I am intrigued by the clairvoyant mute and her son. Maybe you could say "must find sanctuary in the same foreign country she has seen an ill-fated future for."

    I think this logline has promise, but i don’t get who has the bizarre infirmity. I am intrigued by the clairvoyant mute and her son. Maybe you could say “must find sanctuary in the same foreign country she has seen an ill-fated future for.”

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  2. Posted: October 14, 2015In:

    After Lazarus? resurrection, a Roman centurion must rule the Jewish and a new-born rebel sect to contain the spread of the living-deads.

    martinreese Logliner

    I don't understand the premise. ?Why must the centurion rule them? Wouldn't it be better if he led them against the living-deads?

    I don’t understand the premise. ?Why must the centurion rule them? Wouldn’t it be better if he led them against the living-deads?

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  3. Posted: October 3, 2015In:

    When her brother?s diary mysteriously appears at her doorstep, an art forgery investigator uses it to decipher location of stolen diamonds. She also discovers the truth about her father who masterminded an international heist and embarks on a hunt for the treasure during which she finds her family lost decades ago.

    martinreese Logliner

    Seems too long for a logline. It is more of a pitch. Try something like: An art forgery expert's investigation to locate stolen diamonds leads to the discovery that the mastermind behind the international heist is her estranged father. The family lost decades ago doesn't grab me. Hope this is usefulRead more

    Seems too long for a logline. It is more of a pitch. Try something like: An art forgery expert’s investigation to locate stolen diamonds leads to the discovery that the mastermind behind the international heist is her estranged father.

    The family lost decades ago doesn’t grab me. Hope this is useful.

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