1. Posted: March 11, 2013In:

    A young lieutenant?s assignment to turn an antiquated battle cruiser into a traveling museum becomes a life and death struggle when he and his retiree crew must defend a colony world under attack.

    martinreese Logliner

    Thanks. Your comments helped a lot.

    Thanks. Your comments helped a lot.

    See less
    • 0
  2. Posted: March 10, 2013In:

    In the time of a great civil war, a young man is positioned in a tower alone where he must fight for survival with very few supplies, and a sniper rifle.

    martinreese Logliner

    Overall I think the logline is good. I agree that it would to establish what civil war you are referring to. It would help a reader establish if it is a period piece or modern day.

    Overall I think the logline is good. I agree that it would to establish what civil war you are referring to. It would help a reader establish if it is a period piece or modern day.

    See less
    • 0