1. Posted: August 30, 2016In:

    A young reporter and her Olympian interview subject clash when she digs into his past to reinvestigate the notorious murder she believes his father was wrongly convicted for ? a murder for which he pled guilty.

    mateekaq Penpusher

    Thanks for your feedback! Based on your comments, it's pretty clear I'm not getting the core of my story across at all.?I'll be reworking what I have!

    Thanks for your feedback! Based on your comments, it’s pretty clear I’m not getting the core of my story across at all.?I’ll be reworking what I have!

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  2. Posted: August 30, 2016In:

    Keira, a warrior just shy of her sixteenth birthday, will have to survive the creatures of a world twisted by the DNA Wars, and hope her own mutation doesn’t degenerate further as she tries to reach the City of Lights where she will be free from persecution.

    mateekaq Penpusher

    I think you have a very unique idea! Sounds like a rich conflict. I would agree with the comments above on what could help make this logline better.

    I think you have a very unique idea! Sounds like a rich conflict. I would agree with the comments above on what could help make this logline better.

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  3. Posted: May 27, 2015In:

    After her teenage sister commits a sudden suicide, an anxiety-disordered young woman returns to her childhood home and begins to discover family secrets that lead her to investigate the tragedy.

    mateekaq Penpusher

    Thanks for your input everyone! The suicide does lead the main character to begin looking into her sister's life. She discovers that her sister was living a secret life as part of an online sex trafficking ring that could have landed her in trouble, putting the "suicide" in question. I'm going to reRead more

    Thanks for your input everyone! The suicide does lead the main character to begin looking into her sister’s life. She discovers that her sister was living a secret life as part of an online sex trafficking ring that could have landed her in trouble, putting the “suicide” in question. I’m going to rework this thing now!

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